Fixing things up

A few months back I submitted some portfolio pieces to Paizo art director Andrew Vallas and he recently got back to me with some really great feedback on my work. He recommended some changes to the pieces that he would have asked for if they were commissioned for Paizo. Here are some before and after shots of the pieces after receiving feedback.

Andrew's feedback: Revise Feiya's and the fox's faces. They are just a tad too cartoony for our style (especially the fox, whose expression is maybe a bit too expressive).

Andrew's feedback: The mushroom woman and owlbear could use a little more texture and realism.